Win a $25 Amazon Gift Card! Review ‘The Apollo Illusion’ on Amazon for Your Chance

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Have you read my book, The Apollo Illusion, and posted about it on Goodreads, Facebook, your blog, or elsewhere? Have you told friends or family about it?

Why not turn your review into a shot at winning a $25 Amazon gift card?

How to Enter

  1. By next week on Dec. 8, 2018, post your HONEST review of The Apollo Illusion to Amazon by clicking here.
  2. Email me with a link to your Amazon review at shari.lopatin@gmail.com.

That’s it! After the giveaway ends in two weeks on Dec. 8, I’ll randomly draw one lucky winner to receive the $25 Amazon gift card and notify him/her by email.

Why Amazon?

As an indie author, Amazon reviews are VITAL for me. Amazon’s algorithm works like this: the more reviews that are posted about my book, the more Amazon shows it to new readers. This means more people could potentially buy it.

So hurry (you only have one week left) and enter for your chance to win that $25 Amazon gift card (more books, anyone?). Post your review now!

Prices for ‘The Apollo Illusion’ Increasing by December!

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Due to wider distribution, prices for my debut novel, The Apollo Illusionwill soon be going up. If you haven’t grabbed a copy yet, now’s the time while the e-book is only $2.99 and the paperback is $10.99.

These changes may happen as early as December, so if you’re curious to read it, hurry and buy it now!

About The Apollo Illusion

Nothing is ever what it seems in this riveting science fiction dystopia about a future society’s frightening overdependence on technology.

The year is 2150, and bullied nineteen-year-old Flora can no longer ignore the burning curiosity to learn what’s behind the towering Wall surrounding her home state of Apollo. Citizens still read books, discuss philosophy, and send text messages, but questioning The Other Side is forbidden.

When Flora’s naïveté accidentally reveals a dark secret about Apollo, she’s forced into an isolated web of truth, lies, and survival. Fearing for her life, she leaves behind a clue for her childhood friend, Andrew, placing her last hope in their special bond.

The Apollo Illusion is a story for the hackers, the techies, the seekers, and the rebels of the world.

MORE INFORMATION:

  • Audience: ages 15+ (older teens and young adults)
  • Genres: dystopian suspense, science fiction, young adult (YA), speculative fiction

Editorial Reviews

“This is a story that’s well-written and the mysteries contained within the plot draw you in and keep you hooked from one page to the next. The Apollo Illusion should occupy a spot on the to-read list of any true dystopian sci-fi fan.” — John Coon, author of Pandora Reborn

“Pacey, exciting storytelling with great characters, loads of action and a super cute romance. What’s not to love?” — Lucinda Winters, book reviewer and blogger

“The timely release of The Apollo Illusion comes in the wake of ‘alternative facts’ and attacks on the ‘fake news’ media from President Trump and his administration … It’s a dark look at a future more closely in alignment with the present than Lopatin anticipated when she completed the first draft four years ago.” — Arizona Daily Sun

Guys, the e-book price is crazy affordable: only $2.99. So if the storyline piques your interest (even just a little bit), I really encourage you to buy The Apollo Illusion now!

Hilary Dartt Gives Life a Second Chance with ‘The Composition of Order’ (Book Review)

 

The Composition of Order by Hilary Dartt

A wonderful, delightful story that had me crying at the end, with characters so real, I felt like they were my neighbors.

Book: The Composition of Order (The Seedling Homestead Series Book 1)

Author: Hilary Dartt

Publisher: Darttboard Creative Writing, LLC

Published: Sept. 19, 2018

Amazon link: https://www.amazon.com/Composition-Order-Seedling-Homestead-Book-ebook/dp/B07HBCKZ4P

Stars: 5/5

[DISCLAIMER: For the sake of full disclosure, Hilary Dartt was the structural editor for my novel, The Apollo Illusion. However, I bought my own copy of The Composition of Order and was not offered any compensation or benefit for reviewing it.]

Sometimes, becoming a mother makes you a horrible wife. Sometimes, planning life too much can have devastating consequences. And sometimes, those we love most are not who we thought.

Welcome to The Composition of Order by Hilary Dartt, a wonderful, delightful story that had me crying at the end (and I don’t always cry at the end of books).

The Story

The story focuses on Sarah Ward, who as a young (and adopted) child, always preferred order to chaos. Now as an adult, she’s stunned when Donny—her high school sweetheart and husband of 20 years—announces he wants a divorce.

As the couple prepares to see their only child off to college, they take one final, family road trip back home to the farm where Sarah grew up (and they met). There, Sarah finds a mysterious journal at a flea market. Oddly drawn to it, the personal story within prompts Sarah to try and win Donny back. But what Sarah discovers about herself and her family will change her future, and her outlook, forever.

My Take

For most of the story, I believed The Composition of Order to be a solid four stars. However, the story earned a fifth star in my book because of its powerful ending, which impacted me for days after I finished reading. Books often make me tear up, or feel sad, or smile at their closings. But Ms. Dartt managed to make me weep!

With characters so real, they could be neighbors or sisters, The Composition of Order will leave you feeling fuzzy inside, satisfied, and possibly examining your own life. Best of all, it will make you believe in the powerful love of a mother and have hope that second chances do happen—even if they look different than your typical storybook endings.

A must-read for every wife, mother, or woman who understands the complexities of family life, but loves with all her heart anyway.

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READ A SNEAK PEEK! Apollo Illusion Offshoot to be Launching Soon, ‘Stone from HELL’

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If you read my debut novel, The Apollo Illusion, then you know all about Stone and HELL. But how did Stone become the person he was in The Apollo Illusion?

Stone from HELL: An Apollo Illusion Short Story” is the backstory of how Stone came to be, and the birth of the infamous organization, HELL. And yes, one other main character from The Apollo Illusion is also in this short story. 😉

[Read the first two chapters now!]

In essence, “Stone from HELL” is to The Apollo Illusion what “Rogue One” is to Star Wars. It’s an offshoot, an extension, a further explanation. And if you loved the world of The Apollo Illusion and were dying to know more about it, you’ll get your fill in “Stone from HELL.”

Read a Sneak Peek!

Because you follow my blog, I’m excited to offer YOU a sneak peek of this brand new short story!

DOWNLOAD YOUR SNEAK PEEK HERE.

And stay tuned. I still have the cover reveal coming, and “Stone from HELL” will be available on Amazon. My Readers Club subscribers will be the first to know when the rest of the story becomes available, so don’t miss out! Sign up now!

Yes, You Have to Price Your Books Low if You Want People to Buy Them

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You dedicated two years to working on your first novel (here’s mine!). Spent several hundred dollars (or even a couple thousand) on editors and designers.

And now that you’re ready to publish, you’re being told to price your book LOW?

Screw that, right?

I’m Here to Tell You that Low Prices = Higher Readership

I do not advocate giving your book away for free, unless for reviews or giveaway contests. However, if you’re an indie author and you’re publishing your debut novel, you might have to sell your book for less than what it’s worth.

AT FIRST.

If you’re launching your indie career, I doubt this will be the last book you write. So the goal of publishing your first book should be about building readership. An engaged and dedicated readership, who will then buy book #2, and #3, and so forth …

What’s the best way to get readers to take a chance on an indie author they’ve never heard of before? Remove the risk; price your book low.

Increase Prices as Readership Grows

As you begin to build a readership, and people recognize your value as an author, they’ll be more willing to pay a couple of extra dollars for your next book.

Also, as your reviews and sales accumulate on Amazon, at bookstores, and at libraries, you’ll build enough “social validation” to increase prices of your published works.

In essence, think of your indie career as a marathon, not a sprint.

Don’t Forget to Reward Your Most Dedicated Fans!

When the time comes to begin increasing your prices, don’t forget about the readers who launched you to this place of success! Make sure to offer them discounts and benefits for remaining loyal fans.

  • Coupon codes
  • Pre-order deals with special pricing
  • Giveaways just for them

WHAT DO YOU THINK? Do you agree that indie authors should price their books lower to begin building a readership? Comment below!

Goodreads Giveaway! One More Shot to Win ‘The Apollo Illusion’

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The bad news: the giveaway to win one of two signed copies of The Apollo Illusion ended yesterday.

The good news: you can still win an e-copy of The Apollo Illusion via Goodreads!

New Goodreads Giveaway Just Launched!

That’s right. 🙂 A new Goodreads Giveaway just launched on Saturday this week. This time, your odds of winning are MUCH better. I’m giving away 100 e-book copies of The Apollo Illusion.

YES, YOU HEARD ME CORRECTLY. 100 E-COPIES!

But hurry and enter now, before the giveaway ends! https://www.goodreads.com/giveaway/show/284907-the-apollo-illusion.

 

 

 

Why Indie Authors Have to Stick Together

I’ve heard self-publishing “experts” say time and time again that no big difference exists between an author going the traditional route or the indie route.

Ahem — I beg to differ.

Therefore, here are the reasons why us indie authors have to stick together:

1) We have to pay for EVERYTHING.

Editors, designers, copyright filing, advertising, and yes, book tours.

2) And let’s just admit it. Major traditional publishers have one gargantuan advantage over us: connections.

Connections to major media outlets (like the New York Times and Entertainment Weekly), to librarians, to book store owners, to distributors, and to online influencers.

3) No one takes us seriously when we’re starting out.

4) Those dang literary pirates want to steal and sell our stuff!

5) We’re a bunch of anti-establishment rebels.

Of course, we take on this load because we have SO MUCH MORE CONTROL. Over everything.

  • Creativity
  • Legal rights
  • Marketing
  • Design
  • Presentation
  • Pricing

But man, for an indie author trying to make it, you guys know this is an uphill battle! I don’t care what anyone says, going indie is a tougher climb. And this, my friends, is why we all gotta stick together.

While you’re here, did you know I published my debut novel six months ago? “The Apollo Illusion” is a science fiction dystopia about a future society’s frightening overdependence on technology. Learn more by clicking here!

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Is ‘Wildchilds’ by Eugenia Melian the Wild Ride it Should Be? (Book Review)

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Book: Wildchilds

Author: Eugenia Melian

Publisher: Fashion Sphinx Books

Published: Sept. 20, 2018

Amazon link: https://www.amazon.com/Wildchilds-Eugenia-Melian-ebook/dp/B07GXZS2H7

Stars: 2/5

This was my first choice for my first NetGalley Advanced Reviewer Copy (ARC), so trust me when I say, I really wanted to give this debut novel more than two stars. The story was good, and I can tell it was deeply personal for Author Eugenia Meliàn. Unfortunately, Wildchilds was not executed well, like reading a proofread first draft rather than a final product.

The Summary

Here’s the deal with Wildchilds: it’s a story about the dark side of the fashion industry, a #MeToo coming out for a sector that has yet to acknowledge its dirty secrets.

Wildchilds concentrates on Iris, a former Paris model now living in a sort of exile with her teenage daughter, Lou. When Iris’s former lover—who is also the father of Lou—dies, she’s forced to return to Paris to secure his photography estate for her daughter. In doing so, Iris must confront the hidden demons from her past and the trauma she endured as a model many years ago.

Great concept, right? Ms. Meliàn is a former model herself and a veteran agent in the fashion industry, so she gives the reader a real inside look into the profession. However, once I began to read, the story took a turn for the worse.

The Fall

The transitions between points-of-view (POV) and timelines were choppy. At certain parts, Ms. Meliàn transitioned from a third-person POV on one character, to a first-person POV from a completely different character within the same paragraph. Other times, she did not include paragraph breaks, chapter breaks, or character labels when switching POV, creating a sense of daunting confusion for the reader.

Often, her dialogue was shallow or repetitive, slowing the story’s pace. Frequently, she’d spend several paragraphs describing the physical attributes of something—a person or a setting—but skirted over the types of important, profound emotions, backstory, or narration readers crave. Her writing usually told, but rarely showed.

The result was a feeling of disconnect, of a story that dragged, of one-dimensional characters. This book had so much more potential.

The Hope

I do believe Ms. Meliàn has it in her to turn this novel around and create a magnificent piece of work. Her ability to write well with deep suspense and intensity shone through from time to time, especially during a pivotal confrontation between the main protagonist and her dark antagonist. I would encourage Ms. Meliàn to seek out a strong structural editor who can help to hone her craft and work this book into one that would touch many lives.

As it stands now, however, I cannot find it in myself to give Wildchilds more than two stars. I do hope that changes one day.

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ONE WEEK LEFT! Enter to Win a SIGNED Copy of The Apollo Illusion

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In case you missed it, I launched a giveaway for two SIGNED copies of my debut YA science fiction/dystopian suspense novel, The Apollo Illusion. That means YOU could win one of the autographed books!

But the giveaway ends in one week (oh no!). So if you want your shot, hurry and enter now!

What’s the Catch?

To enter the giveaway, just sign up for my email list, “The Readers Club,” by clicking here: https://mailchi.mp/128965a01501/apollo-illusion-giveaway-entry. On Oct. 3, 2018, I will randomly select two lucky winners from the list of giveaway participants. It’s that easy!

Seriously though, you lose NOTHING by trying. 😊 And The Apollo Illusion is getting crazy four-and-five-star reviews from readers and book bloggers: “an enthralling dystopian story” … “absolutely fascinating” … “one of the best books I’ve been asked to review” … and “a gripping story of opposing futures.”  

If you want to know more about the book, then hey—enter the giveaway! You might even get a sneak peek at the opening chapters (wink, wink).

Win a SIGNED Copy of my Book, The Apollo Illusion!

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Do you love reading, author-signed books, and fun giveaways? Well …

Starting today, I’m launching a giveaway for two SIGNED copies of my debut YA science fiction/dystopian suspense novel, The Apollo Illusion. That means YOU could win one of two author-signed copies! Wanna enter? Here’s how:

Enter the Giveaway!

To enter the giveaway, just sign up for my email list, “The Readers Club” before Sept. 30, 2018. Then, on Oct. 3, I will randomly select two lucky winners from the list of giveaway participants. You could be one of them!

  1. Sign up for “The Readers Club” at this link: https://mailchi.mp/128965a01501/apollo-illusion-giveaway-entry.
  2. That’s it!

Here’s More about The Apollo Illusion

The Apollo Illusion has been getting consistent four-and-five-star reviews from readers and book bloggers (and yes, I’m lovin’ it!). Reviewers have called it “an enthralling dystopian story” … “absolutely fascinating” … “one of the best books I’ve been asked to review” … and “a gripping story of opposing futures.”

Personally, I think people are saying these things because the book is about the future consequences of society’s overdependence on technology. Kind of a timely topic. 😉

If you want to know more about the book, then hey—enter the giveaway! You might even get a sneak peek at the opening chapters (wink, wink).