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Enticing Magazine Editors and Media–Successfully Pitch Your Story!

23 Oct

Whether you’re a PR professional selling your company’s story, or a freelancer enticing a magazine editor, understanding how to pitch well is vital.

I’ve enjoyed success as a journalist and media relations professional for a reason.

1. Keep your pitches to 5 sentences or less.  As a freelancer trying to get published in a magazine, I received my best advice from a senior editor at TIME Magazine. Here it is:

Keep your initial pitch to one paragraph (I suggest 5 sentences, tops). 

  • If you’re a freelancer, follow-up with a brief description about your experience (places you’ve been published, years of experience), as well as why YOU should write this story.
  • Cut and paste any additional material, such as a news release, into the email body after your pitch. As a backup, attach the document.

I’ll never forget the editor’s words from TIME, “We are too busy to open any attachments. If it’s not in the email body, we won’t see it.”

2. Forget sounding fancy. Cut to the chase: the five W’s. As a newspaper reporter, the best way to entice me to DELETE your email, was by developing a fancy first sentence. I only cared about the WHAT of your story–so I could decide immediately if it was newsworthy.

  • My number one tip from my last post on writing engaging content was to keep your article lead less than 30 words. Apply that rule to any story pitch.
  • You will lose the reporter’s/editor’s/producer’s attention if don’t tell them upfront the Who, What, When, Where and Why.

3. Make it relevant! Is your story timely? Localized? Who’s the audience? TIME Magazine would rather publish a national trends article, whereas Phoenix Magazine (from Arizona) would seek a feature on a high school coach who’s changed the school’s morale.

Regardless of whether you’re a freelancer or PR professional, do your research.

  • If you live in California, but are pitching in Connecticut, run a Google Maps and get an idea of the geography.
  • Read through your target publication to understand its style before pitching (hint hint: you can work that style and relevance into your pitch).

4. Follow up via phone in two to three days–not the same day. Most editors will get hundreds of emails a day, maybe more. IF they read your pitch, it won’t be the same day you sent it, so give them time. When you call a few days later, start with this:

“Hi ____, my name is _______ and I’m a freelance reporter from ______ following up on a story I emailed you a day or two ago.” Then immediately launch into your story idea. Most likely, if they haven’t seen your email, now they’ll open it.

Above all else, never forget the WIFM: What’s In it For Me? Always put yourself in the editor’s shoes and ask, “Why would I publish this story?” Whatever the answer is, will be your news hook.

Good luck! And stay tuned for another blog, on my old college professor’s secret on finding important magazine editors (yes, she was a magazine editor too) . . .

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5 Tips for Engaging Content–Captivate Your Audience!

15 Oct

I might be no Dan Brown, but I do work for a big company as a corporate communications writer, and have been published regionally as well as nationally. I’m also a former newspaper reporter who’s won two Associated Press awards. Therefore, here are my top 5 writing tips when drafting content for the general public. They’ve NEVER failed me!

1. Keep all article leads less than 30 words (and aim for 25). Trivia question: How many words does the average person read in a sentence before they might begin losing comprehension? Fourteen. . . 14 words! And the average American reads at a 4th-5th grade level. Case in point? The shorter and more engaging your first sentence, the better chance you’ll keep your reader reading your content.

2. Keep your paragraphs short and choppy, and use bullet points and/or subheads. I know, I know, we all love getting creative with our alliteration and descriptive genius. However, we are living in an age of “scanners.” People want to scan for the facts, and they can’t do that while swimming through endless paragraphs upon paragraphs. Break it up, and give your reader the luxury to scan for topics. Otherwise, you’ll lose them.

3. Keep your articles less than 500 words. I learned this neat little tip while writing for the paper. Studies have actually shown that the average reader will begin losing interest in a story after 500 words. Personally, I suggest aiming for 400. It will get your message across while helping it stick in your reader’s mind.

4. Put a face to your message, story, or content. The bottom line is this: People love a good story. Whatever you’re writing about, people will relate much better if you have a human interest angle. Interview someone. Quote them in your content. Relate their personal story to your facts and stats. Then begin your article/blog with their greatest struggles. Trust me, people will cling for more.

5. STAY AWAY FROM JARGON! This is one of my biggest pet peeves. So often, especially in business or corporate communications writing, people get caught up in their profession’s “jargon.” However, the average reader won’t know what they’re talking about, and they’ll cease to care. They’ll simply go elsewhere for the information. While writing your content, ask yourself if you’re explaining your message in a way that a 5th grader can understand. If not, go back, revise, and SIMPLIFY.

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